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"Round The Present
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"Round The Present |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
...Thought streams Like daybreak, filtered through the slats Awakening with you in my mind Somehow warm against my body A suggestion posted on my inner winter That seems to take life of its own...but the blood is ours Tickling my fancy to the palest edges A realization that we have broken through Barriers that some may never do And I am thinking That I have slipped into white waters A fall into the deep pool of collected morning rain Only to find your arms waiting open ...Thought streams Wandering and wrapping 'round me Not draining, or dousing my light But giving ride in the quicksilver flow This prince reflects my closer look Spellbound...locked in gaze of majesty In a moment where grace and sanity blend Timid lifts my hand in disbelief Slowly...softly...stroking the corner of your mouth Just prior to sip of dawn upon your lips Entwined in thought streams Ribbons 'round the present Copyright Kkh 1/22/04 |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Yet another beauty from a pen so poised and talented. So full of life itself... You are a poetess, one admired and cherished. |
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McLean Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 484state of marital bliss |
exquisitely written... McLean |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
nicely penned. enjoyed. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautifully done sigh |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) You sure always wear a yellow ribbon in your thoughts and dreams, sweet friend, this is a most gorgeous piece brimmed with such whimsical magery, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Like daybreak, filtered through the slats Awakening with you in my mind Somehow warm against my body A suggestion posted on my inner winter Hmmm, awwww~ Thank you Diamond lady for another fine gem! |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Hi Kathleen, this is just so good! You have the most special heart to be able to create such beauty! I really missed your poetry. You have such a unique and wonderful style! Take Care, Richy |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Perfect. Eric |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
you blend it all together so beauitfully wrapped in a bow |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
You truly are talented. I aspire to your writing. What more can I say. SG |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Excellent. Enjoyed!  |
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