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ctowen
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0 posted 2004-03-28 11:32 PM


precious
this moment
our two hearts share
connections are made
of which true hearts bare
          with this ring
          with eternal care


cherish
the spirits
treasure of such found
together our souls
now endlessly bound
          with this ring
          with love's longing sound


One's outlook can be another's expression.
  

© Copyright 2004 C. Thomas Owen - All Rights Reserved
Kahlil
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1 posted 2004-03-28 11:49 PM


This is beautiful and precious.  Cherish this time.  ~K~
iliana
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2 posted 2004-03-29 02:53 AM


ctowen --- I'm sending this to two of my best friends who just got married Saturday night.  Thanks for writing it.  
passing shadows
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3 posted 2004-03-29 03:54 AM


and I do love the sound of that
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4 posted 2004-03-29 09:53 AM


lovely lovely
ThisDiamond
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5 posted 2004-03-29 12:51 PM


A beautiful ring to this.
Thoroughly enjoyed.
TD

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6 posted 2004-03-29 01:27 PM


Very tender write -  enjoyed. Chris

   Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
                                          Hans Christian Anderson

Enchantress
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7 posted 2004-03-29 01:28 PM


Ahhh so lovely!  Very much enjoyed.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
   Has held me in the same embrace ~

Grover
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8 posted 2004-03-29 06:13 PM


Very pretty!
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