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Open to Interpretation |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving 
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Open to Interpretation (a Rondelet) In scene askew as laughter wanes to gentle sigh, in scene askew a thousand thoughts to misconstrue of who I've been, of how, of why and where the truth disguised the lie in scene askew. |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Excellent... enjoyed!  |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
 Bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Dawn, I can relate to this but don't know the words for a good reply |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent form Dawn. You have mastered it well. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
enjoyed |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
VERY NICE! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Very Good Enjoyed. Maree Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
You're such a clever writer, muted. I really enjoyed this one.  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dawn~ Your versatility is astounding~ THIS IS MARVELOUS~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
you are all a bunch of sweeties  thank you for the lovely responses |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Perfect! TD |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
i like this. now, i am unfamiliar with traditional poetry schemes.. what exactly makes a rhodelet? im just curious |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I have never been good at these things--your skill show here, m'friend--not a bit contrived and the meanings layer as the words form naturally. Much enjoyed, dawn. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
An excellent rendering, Dawn. Thank you. |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
Thank you guys for making me smile, you are more than appreciated and EagleScorpion I have sent you an email to answer your question |
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sea_of_okc Senior Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 568Oklahoma City, OK, USA |
A difficult form that you have handled very well. I'm impressed  |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Excellent Dawn !!!... I have never been brave enough to venture into any other form other than rhyme Hope |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
What a treat! You are just so much in the flow of your Muse....~P |
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MovesInSilence Member
since 2004-03-21
Posts 111Perth, Australia |
Muchly Enjoyed the read |
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