Open Poetry #31 |
A Chill In My Bones |
Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
+*+*+*+*+*+ There's a chill in my bones, It runs deep within the marrow, I'm blue and I'm trembling, As I plod the straight and narrow. The guiding stars have fallen, The moon has lost its way, The sun has simply disappeared, And lights not up the day. There are no laughing children, No music to my ears, Just the sound of weeping My sad and soulful tears. The birdies have flown away, All the butterflies have died, The oceans have ebbed away, With outgoing tide. The trees have lost their foliage, Flowers have no blooms, As I roam my life's lonely house, Filled with empty rooms. +*+*+*+*+*+ Note: Just poetry folks! [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (04-03-2004 12:23 PM).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
EarthyOne~ Whew ! ... glad for the disclaimer~ This one weeps ... thank you, poetess~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel, I know what happened, you just got up to early and nothing was started yet. LOL |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Excellent write-- glad it's just poetry, Angel! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
it's good you can write like this |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
oh i was worried! but nice to see that the imagination is not limited! very nice |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Oh my, Linda, you had me worried! But how true this is sometimes, when we are moving through dark moments! Great write. And, Seymour, great answer! You made me smile. Love and hugs. Margherita |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
EA, Enjoyed, I often write without it being a personal experience as well. Poetry is wonderful in that it does let us expand and use our emotions, experienced or not, to tell a tale or a poetic novel. I really like your ability to excerise this. Nice! SG |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
I found your poem quite insightful and filled with truth of feeling for one who has not experienced the void of depression. Susan |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
from one who does have a house of empty rooms...you expressed it well. hugs, Linda ( hope you are recuperating well) M |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Linda Lou, I sure am glad that it's just poetry, my sweet little friend. Hope all is well. I've missed you. Hugs, Ethel |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
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