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Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
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Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2004-03-28 01:10 AM



the gental like of your
matter makes me quiver
for hrs. your southern
mentality makes me weak

your eyes how they are so
inoncent yet indearing
your sweet smile how it
stretches for hrs. how
your lips felt pressed
up against mine as we
kissed goodnight.

made me feel like a lady
for tonight. confusion
of the day by your gentel
way not used to being
treated that way.

Count the hrs till i see
your sweet face can hardly
stand it untill you press
your lips against mine in
passion and lust.

trust asure of your gental
ways the honor the way you
make me feel like a respectable
women makes me crave you even
more


unedited

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


© Copyright 2004 Julie O'Neill - All Rights Reserved
iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
1 posted 2004-03-28 01:17 AM


Julie, yeah, you have to watch out for those southern gentlemen -- they'll charm you, for sure!
Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla
2 posted 2004-03-28 01:17 AM


lol
Grover
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since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada
3 posted 2004-03-28 10:46 AM


This is good-- go ahead, why not edit it?
Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla
4 posted 2004-03-28 02:15 PM


thanks I shall
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