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Waves of Emotion
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Waves of Emotion |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla 
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the song that escapes your lips captivates me in ways you won't understand nor do I you hands strum the guitar so hard yet tender as you spun out your web of beautiful music. the passion you have as you sing to me makes me weak for hrs. the ocean how the ways crashed back and forth as i stared right into your eyes the cold breeze touches my legs as i yern for your touch your gental way as you pull off your sweater and cover my legs from the salty ocean air makes me wonder why i am even there to be treated so lovingly i just met you but i already know that i like you more then any other man i encountered you sir our the soul that sleeps inside my eyes. as your muscels tighten i relive the pain with my gental touch sooths you to sleep to a daze of comotoze unedited version Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Beautiful emotions. Love, Margherita  |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
beautifully written. enjoyed reading this thanks for sharing |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
lots of emotion in this one |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Some deep feelings here-- well said! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
it's a beautiful write, but the unedited version is distracting because of the spelling errors the theme is excellent though |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
thanks guys |
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