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Moving to a Different State
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Moving to a Different State |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA 
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I am moving to a different state and you won’t know my name. The state is not one on the map. It’s one of little fame. The state is full of flowers and sky’s of powder blue trees blossomed up like Springtime their limbs reflected in cool pools of enchanted mountain water clean enough to drink where I can swim a boat can float neither of us sink. And feathered clouds like pillows where I can lay my head relaxing in celestial harmony as the lovely world rolls by. The motto of this place is nice – “Welcome” is all it says. Ringing in the ear of mind are softly tinkling silver wind chimes – the state song sung the bells are rung and all of them in rhyme. |
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lil' Angel Member
since 2003-11-14
Posts 116 |
great poem Lil' Angel |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Lil'Angel -- So glad you liked it! Thanks so much.  ...jo |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
*sigh*...a beautiful place  |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
ahhh, I'm just gonna go there and kick back. Thanks for the trip. ~K~ |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Muted, thank you sweetness! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Kahlil -- thank you for reading! Maybe we'll bump into each other there! lol |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wonderfully done! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
The state is full of flowers and sky’s of powder blue I'd like to be there... absolutely wonderful iliana. Maree Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder. |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Beautifully expressed .... we should all have a place like this , it sounds sheer bliss Hope |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sometimes I'm so glad one's state of mind doesn't include an area or zip code... that way I can't receive junk mail or telemarketer calls! I like this very much Jo. Thank you! |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
I've heard it said that we should all mentally prepare a place - our own special place - and yours sounds wonderful. Hold that thought! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 happy to see you floating by  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Iliana~ Oh ... this is just beautifully done~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Truly the best place to be is the harmony of a peaceful state of mind! Enjoyed this write, and thank you for so many encouraging words. TD |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
jo, I can't believe I didn't post to this, as I really, really liked it! Can I move to that state too? Please, as your little sis, won't you take me along? Very creative write; you're so crafty! Sadie |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Iliana, I came back for another short visit to this fun state of yours.  |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
I wanna go there too!  Enjoyable write iliana. hugs, Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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