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Broken
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since 2000-03-12

Posts 271
The woods

0 posted 2004-04-04 12:56 PM

DEAR MISS "EERIE"

You never knew me
You never saw me
While you were translucent
Transparant to the dot

Still I refused to see
What I saw
Still I denied to see
What you were not

You perfidious coquette
You voluptuous libertine
I'd like you to know
You haughty pestilence
That your conductions
Failed to founder me

Yet I was no better
I said love
And meant nothing
I smiled of course
And thought never

Insted I
In a state of reverie
Wished you to be far away
While your kisses tasted snow
And I dreamt of buds in May

So accept this grandiloquent ode
As a bitter
Yet candid adieu
With heartfelt hopes of never
To see your dead
Pallor face again

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

1 posted 2004-04-04 01:02 AM

very good

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2004-04-04 04:09 AM

ouch

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

3 posted 2004-04-04 09:46 AM

Wow....I think she should get the point of these words! Well done. Chris

Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
Hans Christian Anderson

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

4 posted 2004-04-09 12:22 PM

some deep wounds here know how ya feel

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2004-04-09 02:09 PM

In a state of reverie
Wished you to be far away
While your kisses tasted snow
And I dreamt of buds in May

~*~

I'm going to be watching
for more of your writings...

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

6 posted 2004-04-09 07:56 PM

Choice diction, excellent write!

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

7 posted 2004-04-09 08:21 PM

Very emotive writing.....well done!

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

8 posted 2004-04-09 10:23 PM

very, very EERIE, broken
but a good emotive write

hello!

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

9 posted 2004-04-09 10:26 PM

Very nicley done and much enjoyed!
Hugs~

To have lived the dream of a love so true...
is to have seen a glimpse of heaven.

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