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Kicking Kim
Member

since 2001-04-16

Posts 426
Cloud Cucko Land!

0 posted 2004-03-27 07:40 AM

For looking
into the brightness
of your inviting eyes
For reaching
into your soul
and finding your heart
I'm sorry.

For falling
in love
with your tenderness
For letting
you into my life
with opening arms
I'm sorry.

For accepting
the way you treated me
and for thinking it was OK
For feeling
that you were there
in times of need
I'm sorry.

But most of all..
from the depths of my soul
I'm sorry
I ever met you.

"Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression"

Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

1 posted 2004-03-27 08:56 AM

Kim this is a sad poem..but well written...

Oh and by the way..i am NOT sorry...that you are on PIP..beacuse you are a fine poet...

Thank you..

Goldenrose.

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

2 posted 2004-03-27 09:47 AM

i wasnt expecting the last part!
very nice

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2004-03-27 11:11 AM

Kicking Kim,
Oh my. Good write.

Goodknight
Member Elite

since 2002-06-15

Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

4 posted 2004-03-27 11:49 AM

Kimberley - powerful poetry here - sad in a sense but also very much taking control of a relationship - well done - Paul

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2004-03-27 12:38 PM

ooooooo girl! Now you sound like me!

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

6 posted 2004-03-27 01:14 PM

Oh, well done! This one tells the tale.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

7 posted 2004-03-27 07:56 PM

enjoyed this but felt the place you are in thanks for sharing

lil' Angel
Member

since 2003-11-14

Posts 116

8 posted 2004-03-28 12:49 PM

Excellent poem.

Lil' Angel

"There is no wisdom, no insight, no plan that can succeed against the Lord." Proverbs 21:30

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

9 posted 2004-03-28 01:06 AM

We all learn the hard way, I guess. Wishing you newness!

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