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Upon the Sea |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Upon the Sea She waits me there upon the sea Infinites Sea of vanity She does the dance of seven veils Billowing each my seven sails. For I am caught within the wile Within the filigree of guile And will not leave my fantasy Nor question on its sanity I love my world of rainbow roads Where princes live in dreams as toads And kissing is the key to bear The magic of the self-aware Each night I sail the bale anew Each night I stew the new of coup And on this rainbow of delight I spend the wonders of the night Its only day that ages me The mundane and the ennui |
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Kicking Kim Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 426Cloud Cucko Land! |
"I love my world of rainbow roads" I really took a liking to this line It had a certain power to it and depicted your optimism on life! .:'^*-*^':.:'^*-*^':. I thoroughly enjoyed this read I enjoy your style! .:'^*-*^':.:'^*-*^':. ^*-Kimberley-*^  "Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression" |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
A sail on a moon lit night is indeed an experience Sy. Serenely beautiful poem. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
A very fine write as usual Sey... Thank you.. Goldenrose. ''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity'' |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I can smell the salt in the air, Sy... a lovely lovely...a flight to sky... Good morning, you...tea?  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful morning read m'friend. I see Sunshine has taken care of your tea. Then how bout a kiss and hug from me?  ~Morning hugs, Nancy~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ What a beautiful morning greet~ Nobody ... but nobody, works the words like you~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
"Its only day that ages me The mundane and the ennui" a beautiful dream with the last two lines really hitting home with me |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
She does the dance of seven veils Billowing each my seven sails. For I am caught within the wile Within the filigree of guile And will not leave my fantasy Nor question on its sanity I love my world of rainbow roads Where princes live in dreams as toads And kissing is the key to bear The magic of the self-aware Each night I sail the bale anew Each night I stew the new of coup And on this rainbow of delight I spend the wonders of the night Its only day that ages me The mundane and the ennui ==================================== Just think what you could do in Alaska's six month season of night????  LOLSybabers you make me smile with all these couplets of clever and cool... gotta love this one..... She does the dance of seven veils Billowing each my seven sails. and then there is these two lines of poetic delight.... Where princes live in dreams as toads And kissing is the key to bear youre no toad...but you Randy still get kisses! lol  *ww*  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kimberley, And I enjoyed your reply. Thank you scorpio Goldenrose Thank you dear. Sunshine Tea and sympathy? Nancy, And a and hug back.Marge, Huglets back my love. muted, Enjoyed your reply. JM, Alaska, that's where it came to me. I spent about three years there. LOL Thank you Tink WWRS |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
*sigh* |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ok, m'dear, just for you, a sip of sympathy |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
merrily merrily merrily merrily your poetry is but a dream |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing, Thank you dear. Sunshine, inkedgoddess Cute, thank you. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Another great write, Seymour which was very much enjoyed. Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sue, Thank you for the read and nice reply. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Aye Capt' Sey Mour... A delightful read Enjoyed very much.Maree Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder. (by Virginia Woolf) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark Angel My joy you enjoyed. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good Sunday morning hugs, Sir T! "Its only day that ages me The mundane and the ennui" ~ I gather from your exceptionally young spirit, that you have had far more nights, than you have had days, in your illustrious life! ~ and those nights must have been far from mundane!  EA |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
And on this rainbow of delight I spend the wonders of the night Hello, Prince of rainbow roads, you shine! Love, Margherita |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel If you count my nights of dreaming , you are right. Margherita For a second I read Prince of rainbow toads. LOL |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
enchanted loved this! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you MGROVES |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Very well crafted... an extremely good write. Example of fine talent-- gifted poet! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Grover You flatter me. LOL Thank you |
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