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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Cruise twisted tank tops soldiers marching in line beat two three four two three four teen girls walking through the mall. ©2004 Grover Gall |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Grover Where do the words of someone over a hedge stop when localised violence it Something on a Tony Blair/George Bush Junior Statistic I like your words mate Dave |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
yes, they are on a mission!  i enjoyed this tiny little slice of observation here |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Sorry Grover I went all perverse on you man....I'll have to read this again... Eric I love what it did for me though... Ain't doin nothin at all |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Well done Grover...much enjoyed. Hugs~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
This reminded me of when I was that age -- guys and dolls alike would cruise the local Big Boy drive in (no malls back then close enough to cruise) after games on Friday night -- not tank tops then -- just tanks! lol -- enjoyed.  .......jo |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL, I've seen this scene |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
ooo, I remember that cruise feeling! Hip-hugger bellbottoms with (non-pierced) bellybuttons showing... I like the way you wrote this. ~K~ |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Grover, Your twenty words completely filled my mind with vivid moving pictures. Sadie |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes, I remember those days |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
i remember those days too. and each day i see a friend or family member whose life has been hell as results from the war. very sad. thanks for sharing |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
I prefer to think of them as the minions of merchandising, the economic avante garde of capitalism, the imperial guard of economic development...but soldiers is cool too...nice write... |
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