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Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

0 posted 2004-03-28 03:41 PM

Crawling within,
going underneath the skin
reveals the pain,
the fight to gain.

Self.

Step away from your mirrored self,
see what else is on the shelf.

Perspective.

Points of sunlight gleem
within fragmented beams,
and rainbows can follow pain
as easily as rain.

Step away from
Self.

See who else
you may be.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

1 posted 2004-03-28 03:54 PM

Kacy -- As you just read in mine, I'm working on it! Great poem!

....jo

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2004-03-28 04:00 PM

Glad that you connected with this one, Iliana. So, does this mean I'm not alone on that shelf?

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

3 posted 2004-03-28 04:01 PM

Step away from
Self.

See who else
you may be.

I've had a lil peak, and I'm almost there.

Enjoyed

Maree

Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder.
(by Virginia Woolf)

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

4 posted 2004-03-28 04:06 PM

Maree, OK, does this mean you're going to show yourself more often? LOL, hope so. Thanks for the visit.

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

5 posted 2004-03-28 04:48 PM

Kacy, your journey has been so good, so rejuvenating for you. Thanks for sharing it with us. I love this write. ~K~

ChemicalRepose
Member

since 2004-03-28

Posts 102

6 posted 2004-03-28 05:07 PM

This is very interesting, and enjoyable to read.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2004-03-28 05:30 PM

great thoughts!

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

8 posted 2004-03-28 05:33 PM

Kahlil, thank you!
Chem, thanks, and again, welcome.
Dixie, thanks for reading!

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

9 posted 2004-03-28 06:49 PM

Kacy~

AMEN !!!

This is spot on !!!
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

[email protected]

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

10 posted 2004-03-28 09:13 PM

i'll see if i can try this

and if it works, i'll make sure to send you a hug

enjoyed this very much!

bbent
Senior Member

since 2001-01-07

Posts 521
Alaska

11 posted 2004-03-28 09:30 PM

Good uplifting write.Truly enjoyed and understand...

Live like it's your last day...
Dance like nobody's watching...
Love like you've never been hurt...

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

12 posted 2004-03-28 09:50 PM

smiling a thank you

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