Open Poetry #31 |
Vast |
Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beyond a gesture or a single word. We are vast in our expressions. The night presses deep against the fingers...savoring its moment in the distance of a touch. There is nothing that we reach for that is absent from the arms. Feel the world pass in silence as the breeze across your cheeks. Allow your lips to part in wonder at the sweetness of this kiss. There is nothing to be said that is absent from the lips. Beyond a gesture or a single word. We are this... Vast in all expressions. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"There is nothing to be said that is absent from the lips. Beyond a gesture or a single word. We are this... Vast in all expressions." Beautiful dear Eric...much enjoyed as always. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy Lee~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, Has held me in the same embrace ~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Eric, you are so polished, and so smooth... thank you for such a visual treat. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Eric, I so very much enjoy your poetry. TD |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Very nicely done. Enjoyed this. Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Eric Wonderful! |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Simply..breathless....My favorite line ...was the lips parting for that kiss..what a kiss! HELLO!!!!! My favorite of yours! ~ARH love and hugs Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (03-27-2004 04:10 AM).] |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Ericc -- what a glorious expression of romance this one is -- yes, love feels vast! |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
very lovely |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
We delight in the vastness of our expressions. We expand to meet in our wholeness. We merge encompassing the world in our embrace. We hold all the sounds resonating in Universe. We stretch reaching beyond what our eyes see. We collapse and rejoice in each other’s infinity. In this touch we fulfill all our wildest desires. In this touch we express the immensity of ourselves. Dear Eric, thank you for your wonderfully inspiring poem! You just play the secret chords of our souls so well .... I love you. Margherita |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
I found myself slowing down and backing up to read this beauty. You title, thoughts, and presentation are outstanding. I really like this. Sadie |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
incredible once again! |
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