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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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It is going to have to rain, if only to release what is building inside; the gray has to find its way out soon * |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
The wise man would build an "ark"--doncha think?  |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
The rain will convince the spring flowers to bloom in vivid colours. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
That is soooooo cool!!!! I listenned to it rain all morning here.... loved the sound it made and the way it smelt.... and the trees are getting to be more brown than grey... it is a start.... and it is atleast better than snow!!!! Sherry |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy your read  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Seems there are times like these... when we just have to let it pour. Hugs~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Sunshine I hadn't read before my plea You care about talent I join you on that Dave |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Ah, now I understand what is happening to me!  SG Nice |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
just beware the floods, can be hard to recover from those  yes, the gray does come out eventually...no doubts about that |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Is that why my hair turned gray?......Did I finally rain from the inside out?.....Now there's the start of a poem for you Karilea... I like the simplistic fullfillment of this.... Eric Ain't doin nothin at all |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
kinda sad but good |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Sunshine, so creative, and clever the write in content and form! |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
a sweet little droplet just splattered me allll over; the minute shower felt great. How clever. Little did I know you were making the rain while I was busy making a kite! We're certainly having fun today in artistic endeavors! Great wording and "gentle" droplet-flow. |
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Kicking Kim Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 426Cloud Cucko Land! |
The rain shall clean you up to look your best for the sunshine! .:'^*-*^':.:'^*-*^':. Lets hope that the sunshine is here soon. Spring is about to spring upon us!! .:'^*-*^':.:'^*-*^':. Enjoy the weather   ^*-Kimberley-*^ "Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression" |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Love your teardrop and think I "got" this one. This "concrete" form is, I think, extremely in vogue at this time. In a recent poetry class I took, one woman wrote of a campfire and the form of the poem was of the flashing flames. Very effective. KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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