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bbent
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0 posted 2004-03-26 05:17 AM



bent ku 2

Like jazz without reefer,
War without creepers,
Lifes not the same without you.

Live like it's your last day...
Dance like nobody's watching...
Love like you've never been hurt...

© Copyright 2004 Ray Conley - All Rights Reserved
Professor Gloom
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of Depression
1 posted 2004-03-26 05:24 AM


Jazz with some wine
Is actually quite fine
Tends to tickle the mind

Gloom

bslicker
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state of mind
2 posted 2004-03-26 08:12 AM


Jazz in the street
buckets at their feet
a New Orleans beat
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bernie
  


A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

Toerag
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Ala bam a
3 posted 2004-03-26 09:58 AM


jazz without reefer?..Is there such a thing?
Liked the write...

Midnitesun
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Gaia
4 posted 2004-03-26 11:01 AM


jazz has the coolest beat
it moves the mind
not just the feet

no easy feat

cool write

LeeJ
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5 posted 2004-03-26 11:06 AM


the air of jazz brings us close
to where we wish to be
harmonica, sing your sweet
topography of spring
there is no other place
the music strokes our face
within the heart of notes that whisper
of my soul you are the keeper
when the music plays, stops and starts
inbetween, vibrations light the stars


great write!

DavePage
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6 posted 2004-03-26 04:38 PM


You spoke words

Dave

bbent
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7 posted 2004-03-26 08:17 PM


Thanks,appreciate all your replies.Cool flow.

Live like it's your last day...
Dance like nobody's watching...
Love like you've never been hurt...

passing shadows
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displaced
8 posted 2004-03-27 04:29 AM



iliana
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9 posted 2004-03-27 04:31 AM


Whoa....what a lot said so briefly!  Good one!     .......jo
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