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Sleeping with Tears
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Sleeping with Tears |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind 
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Essence that move in you water maybe fog I am both the loneliness of spirit tangible touching would you feel me in twilights dreams haunting breath upon your shoulders I reach for speech that will not greet me gelid-- moment to moment stillness fills this night darkness my days I wish winter away, its' whisper and soul Last night I fell asleep without you beside me, drifitng in and out trying to find comfort tomorrow will be harder -- the day long and again I will hope&pray upon silent waters still We are hues of each other on polished stone but tonight-- I sleep with tears ~~**~~ Walking with bare feet among a tapestry of words, each woven thread, awakening the soul ~~**~~ |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This poem is so sad. I almost had tears in my eyes. Awesome poem. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Lauren, this is longingly, achingly beautiful. I haven't told you enough how much I enjoy your writing. This gets me: "We are hues of each other on polished stone but tonight-- I sleep with tears" Saving this one ~K~ |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Lauren, this was so sad. My heart goes out to you. The last lines really pulled my heart strings.  |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
you touched my soul and brrought another tear to my eye. thanks for sharing |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Beautifully written,sad. I know this feeling,time will heal it. Hugs |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
gawd  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
We are hues of each other on polished stone ============================= that says it all...... mothy heart-hugs to you L-girlie.   |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
L~ am still keeping you and yours in thought and prayers. This write aches of your love and speaks volumes of the soul in you that I have come to know and love so very much. Hugs dear  sister.  It's better than I could have planned.. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Hope and Prayer, dear... two very powerful movements that bring many good things... You are not alone. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
loved it  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Greeneyes Lovely |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Lovely Lauren, may the tears give way to sweet dreams that will reflect a new and brighter reality... Comforting hugs, Linda |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lauren This poem aches with feeling. My thoughts are with you. *hugs* |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
We are hues of each other on polished stone but tonight-- I sleep with tears Lauren, I understand. I've missed you, my friend. Heart Hugs,  Ethel |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
~Holding you and yours close in thought and prayer~ |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow...so moving and poignant. Eric |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Oh hell, you good looking thing....wipe away those tears and sleep with me!!!!! |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
ohh greeneyes ...babe don't cry ...with eye's like yours he won't be gone for long hugs from wolfy |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
 this touches me |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
love to all and thank you for the thoughts nad prayers....and Toe? LOL sigh you made me laugh and smile....THANK YOU! luv ya all Greeneyes~ ~~**~~ Walking with bare feet among a tapestry of words, each woven thread, awakening the soul ~~**~~ |
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