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Kristabell
Senior Member

since 2003-11-29

Posts 678
Portland, OR

0 posted 2004-03-24 08:22 PM

Searching,
Deep down inside,
But there is nothing to find,
The more I look,
I find yet again,
A closed book.

No where to turn,
Beyond what I thought was there,
Things that were stable,
Now have become,
A never ending fable.

Everything is falling,
Away from my weakened grasp,
Memories of my passed,
Memories of the present,
Over flow my already drenched mind.

Confused,
But even that begins to fade,
As my world,
The one I thought I knew,
Crumbles,
Until what was once made,
Falls into nothing,
An empty serenade.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2004-03-24 10:26 PM

Confused,
But even that begins to fade,
As my world,
The one I thought I knew,
Crumbles,
Until what was once made,
Falls into nothing,
An empty serenade.

~*~

This made me wonder, Krista, whether or not you've ever studied the classics of music. I understand your meaning, but I have yet to find an empty serenade. I imagine there can be one, yes...but listen again...

there is a trill and thrill yet to hear.

Now...write me another poem, please.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2004-03-24 10:27 PM

Oh, Dear Kristabell, this was such a sad serenade ~ but so poetically expressed.

This really moved me and I feel like sending you a great big angel hug!

Warm, comforting hugs,
EA

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

3 posted 2004-03-24 10:37 PM

Very moving. Enjoyed. Chris

Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
Hans Christian Anderson

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

4 posted 2004-03-25 12:53 PM

Kristabell, such a sad song, sad and lonely, and I know the feeling. In looking back over many years, though, I've found that those times were great periods of growth and change -- thanks for sharing and wishing you well.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
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5 posted 2004-03-25 03:12 AM

love the rhyme shceme here!

beautiful sad write, I understand well

Kristabell
Senior Member

since 2003-11-29

Posts 678
Portland, OR

6 posted 2004-03-25 11:56 PM

Thanks all of you!!

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