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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
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0 posted 2004-03-24 04:50 PM


Surfaces that twinkle back in laughter
Across faces graces sunshine
Mime and mirror in the likeness

Rising from anticipations loins the moon
Seeping through the coursing afternoon
Want; in layered compote of sugar and self

By friend, what definition is required?
Stamped upon the neatly folded corners
Sheer, for certain love is waiting here

Roped and neatly tied and tidied
Braced within the channels as confided
The attraction must be permanently clear

With so many chasms being here
Yet the center to ignite, bearing weight and leaving light
Resonance that haunts the joyful soul

And yet that separates, antiquates it’s coral call
And friend a heartbeat from not clear at all
Brought into line this renegade, emotions blind

A level down and deeper
Where holds your heart
Defines the lines

Copyright Kkh 3/24/04


© Copyright 2004 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
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1 posted 2004-03-24 05:32 PM


Diamond

I like this perception of levels.

Found this thinking very interesting..
"Roped and neatly tied and tidied
Braced within the channels as confided
The attraction must be permanently clear"

Eric

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2 posted 2004-03-24 08:35 PM


you always manage to vividly describe an emotion i always take a little bit away with me when i read you
passing shadows
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3 posted 2004-03-25 03:33 AM


wonderful write
iliana
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4 posted 2004-03-25 03:41 AM


TD -- So very well thought out and written!   .........jo
steavenr
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5 posted 2004-03-25 11:26 PM


this is simply beautiful...no wait...it is complexly beautiful...nicely done
ghost_got_married
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6 posted 2004-03-25 11:54 PM


i can only say what has already been said this is a wonderful write
Margherita
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7 posted 2004-03-26 12:21 PM


With so many chasms being here
Yet the center to ignite, bearing weight and leaving light
Resonance that haunts the joyful soul


So very beautiful!
Love, Margherita

Sadelite
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8 posted 2004-03-26 12:36 PM


Your imagery brought back good thoughts.  Thank you; I enjoyed your poem, as always.
               Sadie

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