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Soleil Noir
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since 2001-12-19
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0 posted 2004-03-26 06:51 AM



Awakeagain


Even behind closed lids
It is dark, yet
Because it is cool
And sense the air around me,

As white thundering sounds fall far away
In some proximal distance,
Crickets
And tree frogs
Come into early morning play,

Your hand brushing my cheek
Reaching over,


Moments passing in dusky shadows


Behind dark cool sense
White sounds click crickets
Electric awakenings

My hand reaches
Buttons

A deja view


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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2004-03-26 08:46 AM


Soleil,
Enjoyed the symbols and metaphors.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2004-03-26 08:57 AM


Soleil~ so good to read you here this morning!
You must not stay away so long.
Much enjoyed this piece.
Hugs~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
   Has held me in the same embrace ~

Soleil Noir
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since 2001-12-19
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3 posted 2004-03-26 08:59 AM



Thank you Sy, I'm sure you saw it all quite clearly

NancyLee, I do a lot of reading, and hope to post more soon, you know how the winds blow behind the shadows

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
4 posted 2004-03-26 11:19 AM


Very lovely.
Margherita

kayjay
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5 posted 2004-03-26 12:00 PM


The times between rest and wakefulness often reveal our subconscious dilemmas.  I found both warmth and chill here, and "deja view" is a wonderful word play.  KJ

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

scorpio
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since 2002-10-02
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right...there
6 posted 2004-03-26 12:17 PM


Sensual and expressive.

believe in what your heart feels...

passing shadows
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displaced
7 posted 2004-03-26 12:20 PM


warm and passionate
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