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Awakeagain
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
Awakeagain Even behind closed lids It is dark, yet Because it is cool And sense the air around me, As white thundering sounds fall far away In some proximal distance, Crickets And tree frogs Come into early morning play, Your hand brushing my cheek Reaching over, Moments passing in dusky shadows Behind dark cool sense White sounds click crickets Electric awakenings My hand reaches Buttons A deja view |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Soleil, Enjoyed the symbols and metaphors. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Soleil~ so good to read you here this morning! You must not stay away so long. Much enjoyed this piece. Hugs~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
Thank you Sy, I'm sure you saw it all quite clearly  NancyLee, I do a lot of reading, and hope to post more soon, you know how the winds blow behind the shadows  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very lovely. Margherita |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
The times between rest and wakefulness often reveal our subconscious dilemmas. I found both warmth and chill here, and "deja view" is a wonderful word play. KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Sensual and expressive. believe in what your heart feels... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
warm and passionate |
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