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0 posted 2004-03-24 07:35 AM




they came from
far and near
masmerized by the music
that drew them here
as the pie piper
they all followed
on foot
and many a carload
music to the ear
what really brought
them here
the word
was love
peace signs
flown above
make love not war
was the word for today
peace and happyness
is what they  tried to say
love one another
all sisters and brother
high on life
love in the heart
ones who envied
created hate
that was only the start
love one love all
is what we know
control, killing ,
is what they show
power is what made
them stand tall
trusting is what made
us take the fall
we spoke, we sang
of god's word
they wanted us to destroy
human life, how obsurb
ones who wrote their music
to spread their word
fell from the sky
like a defensless bird
others sang out
what's happening within
they gave us drugs
now they knew
they would win
freedon
is what it's all about
control is the power
without a doubt
flowers in the hair
music fills the air
greed power
determined to win
pass off drugs
an evil within
high times
laughter and smiles
to feel the love
we traveld many a mile
we can take you higher
and make you feel better than before
their game to get us
only if we knew what was instore
many a good soul
has lost his sight
words still travel on
music in the night
people came from all over the land
a smile, a warm touch of the hand
caring and sharing,
you could see the love
like a vision of angels
in the heavons above
we wouldnt think
as they wanted us to
alter our minds
they knew what their drugs could do
destroy our minds
steal our soul
found their way
for total chaos and control
torment our babies
rape the young ladies
played little boys
like their own personal toys
write predictions of how its going to be
then create what they say,we beleve what what they want us to see
a world of sin
created by men, take love from the hear
fill it with hate
now your indide the devils gate
power and greed
sin and drugs
is how they succeed
cant raise our kids
the way we should with love
no time gotta work, off with a shove
no work, no home
evil sneaks in
when their all alone
its not what you have
but whats within
greed has taken over
honest values cant win
listen  good to their words
as they predict then create
is it really god
our human fate


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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2004-03-24 07:45 AM


MGROVES
It hasn't changed, good write, enjoyed the read.

Grover
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2 posted 2004-03-24 10:42 AM


Enjoyed, good poem!
MGROVES
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3 posted 2004-03-25 04:56 PM


thankyou so much for replies


iliana
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4 posted 2004-03-26 02:08 AM


PIP is at least one good step in the right direction.  We need to create and we can here -- for everthing we create, it's worth twice as much as the negative around us.  Enjoyed your writing.  
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