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Open Poetry #31

"I still love and need you"

Brad_Smith
Member

since 2004-01-09

Posts 70
Dallas, Texas

0 posted 2004-03-24 03:21 AM

To climb so high
So far
So fast

One pebble tumbled
and I am buried in the rubble

Of a precious stone
from my past

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2004-03-24 04:08 AM

just like that...yep

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

2 posted 2004-03-24 04:18 PM

Yep...

We sometimes need to watch were we are stepping...

Nice job!

"toss me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

3 posted 2004-03-24 04:28 PM

So much feeling in so little words.
Enjoyed! Chris

Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
Hans Christian Anderson

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2004-03-24 04:46 PM

Layered liquid, this.
Very good, Brad...
thank you!

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

5 posted 2004-03-24 05:40 PM

Very interseting write considering the title which makes it all come together

Eric

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

6 posted 2004-03-24 08:28 PM

wow, so much in such a tiny poem...very deeply felt

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

7 posted 2004-03-26 02:17 AM

Uh-oooo. Hope you can regain your balance. So much said here!

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