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Wolf Dreams. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665
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Stepping from your dreams; with full confidence, your minds eye fixed on my eyes and snarling teeth. Mesmerising you with cold chill. Into dream forests of twilight you run, my intention is not to hunt you, but protect you. Pulse of heart, louder and louder still, i hear it, feel it. Why do you run? The forest is mine. I alone am power. Slow, steady your heart; nothing can harm you, my majesty will not allow it. Succumb to my feral being. Freezing snow will chill you; i will yield to nothing, while with me, warmth will comfort you. My crimson heart beats controlled rythyms. Scented on my air; prey i despatch and eviscerate, it is so, it is my will. You may enter my forest untouched; for love that is life, is found within me, my world. My warm breath mists on the freezing air. Gaze into my eyes and see wilderness, my power is eternal. You may walk in my shadow; under my dark sky nights. Into the minds of others i will walk; from the darkest hole i will leap from dreaming minds to reality...... ....and kill......... ''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity'' [This message has been edited by Goldenrose (03-26-2004 06:42 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
didn't expect that ending...wow |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
This is very good!  |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Stepping from your dreams; with full confidence, your minds eye fixed on my eyes and snarling teeth. Well said! Sadie |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Goldenrose Well done, enjoyed the read. |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
howl of a read golden wolf |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Goldenrose~ Respecting the talent here~ AND THIS - 'Into dream forests of twilight you run' - is a killer (no pun intended) line~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
enjoyed very much lol |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A fine example of your versatility as a writer! ~ and I thought I knew you, dear Romantic Rose of Gold! lol  EA |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I like your new format, Phil. I also found the poem to be very intense and strong. One typo [darkest]...[adrkest] and then...it's a  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
GoldenRose -- this certainly sounds like the big bad wolf -- crafty writing. |
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