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A Feeling Too Far
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A Feeling Too Far |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A Feeling Too Far I understand the reciprocal nature of a relationship. The importance of holding feelings in reserve until a mutual attraction is secured. I know what happens when you allow your feelings to move forward unaware, secure in the feelings of your own heart, but unsure of how much the other cares. From these actions my heart still wears the scars, of times moved forward sans shared desires. The pain obtained from advancing a feeling too far. JamesLee March21 2004 |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Very, very well written James. Applause. jwesley |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Once burnt, twice shy.....wise perspective, tho passion overtakes us at times. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes...sigh |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
James, I'm not sure feelings are some things that can be measured in units and dipped out according to other's proportion. I liked your poem. It resonated here. Sadelite |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
i feel the same.. enjoyed reading this  |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Damned if you do and damned if you dont Dave |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
James...I know this feeling all too well! ~ARH  love and hugs Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (03-27-2004 04:14 AM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent write James.. One of your best! Hugs~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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