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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2004-03-22 07:28 AM


Tonight

Tonight is filled with sprites of light
Spirit frills on phantom flights
Weaving in and out the glen
Leaving flashes now and then

Fireflies like prancing steeds
Signaling their wants and needs
Asking in a light of Braille
Who will come and be my grail

Each will fly in august trust
To find the answer of its lust
Come with me and join with me
This voyage in forever’s sea

To stay our stay along the way
To bring completion to the day
To make a future of our seed
As is the very primal need

This firefly is one of two
It takes the two for one renew.



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1 posted 2004-03-22 07:33 AM


very nice way to sing the cycle of life
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2 posted 2004-03-22 07:43 AM


Fine writing Sey...very much enjoyed reading...

Goldenrose.

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3 posted 2004-03-22 08:16 AM



Gesturing spring...
and thoughts that bring
about renew
and you...

smiling with you, Sy.  A very, very
good morning to one of my favorite
poets...

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4 posted 2004-03-22 08:21 AM


Spirit frills on phantom flights
Weaving in and out the glen
Leaving flashes now and then

Love these lines Seymour. Tis the fairies it is!! Wonderful. hugs, Chris

   Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
                                          Hans Christian Anderson

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5 posted 2004-03-22 08:35 AM


"Tonight is filled with sprites of light
Spirit frills on phantom flights
Weaving in and out the glen
Leaving flashes now and then

Fireflies like prancing steeds
Signaling their wants and needs
Asking in a light of Braille
Who will come and be my grail"

Wonderful wonderful morning write dear Sy!
~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~

Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding wound
...or a smiling mouth.

         ~  Kahlil Gibran

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6 posted 2004-03-22 09:12 AM


Fireflies like prancing steeds
Signaling their wants and needs
Asking in a light of Braille
Who will come and be my grail

Each will fly in august trust
To find the answer of its lust
Come with me and join with me
This voyage in forever’s sea

=================================


Can a tinkerbell moth join in the flight.


Im loving this poetic promise of spring and summer Sy-guy...your muse is as constant as the seasons. Guess that makes you like a cadence calendar. *L*

*ww*

Home is a feeling I buried in you ...
I'm alright, I'm alright ... It only hurts when I breathe ...

M.E.

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7 posted 2004-03-22 09:28 AM


Good morning, T-Man!

May "sprites of light" forever spirit your nights! ~ and may you glow as brightly as the fireflies that lovingly surround you...

Love & Spirit Light,
EA

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8 posted 2004-03-22 04:49 PM


To stay our stay along the way
To bring completion to the day
To make a future of our seed
As is the very primal need


Very beautiful and profound, dear Seymour. I am sure you bring completion to the day ... for in your heart unfolds so much beauty always.

Love, Margherita

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9 posted 2004-03-22 06:06 PM


Your words

are beyond description

in the best way possible

Dave

Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 2004-03-23 07:52 AM


muted
Thank you sweet.

Goldenrose
Enjoyed writing, thank you.

Sunshine
One of my favorite loves.

Chris,
Hugs back my dear.

Nancy,
Thanks for the wonderful.
Hugs.

JM,
Hope I'm not on the last page. LOL
WWRS

Earth Angel,
Nothing but hugs from Mr T

Margherita,
You are a dear.

Dave,
Thank you my friend.

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11 posted 2004-03-23 04:09 PM


Seymour, you amaze me. I love the flow and rythm. I aspire to your whimsey.

Thanks for a delightful read.
SG

Seymour Tabin
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12 posted 2004-03-23 04:20 PM


SimplyGold
Thank you for the delightful comment.

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