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Open Poetry #31

Rockery Mockery

Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

0 posted 2004-03-22 11:22 AM

Rockery,
Leading down a blank and narrow road.
Jabbering birds above, perched upon branches of oak.
Maple leaves red,green falling into a sea,
upon the ground.

A sunlighted mockery,
The darkened path of mine.
Baracaded in a trance of lost time.
Something colorful.
Underconstruction signs, let me know it the end of times.

Love,
xXx~*KELLIE*~xXx
Graduation : January 29th 2004

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

1 posted 2004-03-22 12:49 PM

Nice!

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

2 posted 2004-03-22 04:34 PM

Rewrite it please

You have the talent the desire and the ability

Dave

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

3 posted 2004-03-22 08:54 PM

enjoyed

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

4 posted 2004-03-22 10:54 PM

Kellie, reading this aloud is amazing. Good write!

SimplyGold
Senior Member

since 2002-07-10

Posts 1453

5 posted 2004-03-23 04:10 PM

Enjoyed.

SG

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