Open Poetry #31 |
To Love I Now Aspire |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Picture by Alan Ayers * * * I've taken leave of my senses Since love came knocking on my door Feelings long ago abandoned Have now risen to the fore You touched a place inside me That was a wilderness until now For a moment time stood still As you kissed me on the brow With inhibitions cast aside You showed me love in all its glory Through each and every verse Of love's neverending story You filled my empty heart With passion and desire Since you came into my life It is to love I now aspire * * * "I never knew how to live until I knew how to love" I am in motion |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Suetang A lovely write, enjoyed the read. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
How beautiful Sue! When I'm a bit blue or lonely.. I know I can count on an uplifting romantic write from you to pick me up. And this one is most certainly a lovely! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
soo sweet , nice write ....... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
So beautifully romantic, dear Sue. Well you do! Love, Margherita |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Hi Sue ... A wonderful write as always and so romantic. Hope all is well with you and I miss you. Drop me an email when you have a chance and let me know what's new and how you are. Huggles, Marti I take no credit for my poems. Although I write them, I feel |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Sue just one word describes this love poem...Brilliant.... Thank you... Goldenrose. ''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity'' |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Sue Lovely Dave |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Sue, you could sell these and make it big! |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Sue - you do write romance nad love and oh so well - Paul |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, I have missed your poetry the last few weeks, yay, as always you soar like a butterfly across these pages, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Sue -- lovely love-filled poem! |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
I spend too much time just staying alive...guess I'll never really know love....well done |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Well done, and well said! "toss me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
A beautiful write Sue.....The picture is so fitting! Eric |
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