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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Bring it down to double lines add the single digits, and don't forget to carry ones-- god knows that I never did... Whatchya gonna do with that? throw it out the window? THINK. Something comes of everything-- numbers totalling mystique adversity/infinity-- something takes the place of me. Even as the math gives up with a dot-dot-dash, perhaps? a little line of double glee connected by the mystery making it so musical something takes the place of me... whispering the hammering of the silent notes of why, with the dot-dot-boring-dash-- On! Until infinity! Tell me that I didn't try as I nailed my own refrain... pinky hammering the tome tooling leather in the bind-- smoke and whiskey leatherings waterstains the reasons why as I drop my offerings tears another seasoning as I drink the greening in I understand: It's "Pi". |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Poem are real good but Pi are not square!(usually) Hey there kid nothing could take the place of you as you indicate here......Oh God that's right poetry, naw even that won't work. Love your stuff though, it's so darn creative...I'm usually all over it like a fat kid on a smartie. Reagrds to you and you never did tell me what tune you played at your wedding???? Eric Ain't doin nothin at all |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
We danced to "Woman" by John Lennon. It was a waste of a beautiful song too.  thank you tho, lovie. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
WHY? |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I'd like to know that too... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Now, which is better...the poem? Or the comments?  Or the whole of it? Yep...the whole of it....  |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Karen?... So much to this... I've lost track of how many times I've read it... it just keeps calling me back again...but with each read, I see/feel something new... and?... I've learned a few things too... smile... I could quote favorite lines...but there are too many... so just know that, far beyond the 'math' of it...I felt this... Love you, lady...  "When the power of love overcomes the love |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karen You're amazing! Sure would like to spend some time with you, learning math and things! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
gawwwd I love reading you aloud... me thinks you walk around the house hearing everything in rhyme...I bet you dust in meter, cook in cadence.  and this offering.... cooler than a mere moth has words for... (remember this?) when I read you...  lol  Home is a feeling I buried in you ... |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Even as the math gives up with a dot-dot-dash, perhaps? a little line of double glee connected by the mystery making it so musical something takes the place of me... Enjoyed. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I throw all my mathematics out the window |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Math! blech "tooling leather in the bind-- smoke and whiskey leatherings waterstains the reasons why" SWEEEET! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Serenity -- this was brilliant! |
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