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Blowing Weeds
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Blowing Weeds |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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Blowing weeds sealed to their fate wed to their plight extending fingertips strumming the breeze yearning for flight language of silence fingers draw signs on the blackboard of night ascention of dreams releasing of chains thru the silvergull's flight ringing of chimes song of redemption the bird gone from sight [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (03-16-2004 04:43 PM).] |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
This made me think of the seashore, when all the gulls are squabling...a spring afternoon... Your opening verse was striking Michelle... made me think about several points of view. Well done. TD |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Inkedgoddess -- this was lovely imagery! |
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*Belabebeautiful*
since 2003-01-03
Posts 696washington, USA |
Beautiful imagery...made me think of twilight in the spring...sigh...thank you for the lovely thoughts. ~Live and Laugh~ Because of you I laugh a little harder, smile a little more, and cry a little less |
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WildPoet Member
since 2003-11-10
Posts 205California |
Your poem carried me there! WildPoet  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
extending fingertips strumming the breeze yearning for flight Beautiful images! I love your poetry very much. Love and hugs. Margherita  |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thanks so much for taking the time to read and comment |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Like it Ink Dave |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
This is an Okey Dokey! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
love the style truly you wonderful write...makes me wanna hit the beach! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thanks all nice of you to stop in |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
extending fingertips strumming the breeze sweetness....... |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Wow, my now favorite of yours... jwesley |
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