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Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

0 posted 2004-03-21 01:30 AM

Circles gold Circling

Concepts, supposition, reality parlaying
Mountainous magnification of dogma, deities and
Which witch died,
Superstitions await, patently patient,
With persistence,

Circles begin …

No rock thrown without circles
Being known

Glass houses forebear
Knowing knowledge and aptitudes

So brick and wall all that would be
The should of be shall come

And sacred shall it be
In rose and colored glass
To arise again in rose feminine
That cryptic comes to those who pass
In circles, gold circling

When sun and moon arise
Eclipsing falsities

Still there are circles, circling
Encompassing all most important…

Her story.

The circle of sun arises,
Greeting moon in all aspect,

While the love of apple, persists.

Voiceless
Senior Member

since 2001-02-19

Posts 686
Under the stars upon the wind

1 posted 2004-03-21 01:51 AM

I enjoyed this very much..
It uses allusions beautifully.

Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial)

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

2 posted 2004-03-21 04:07 AM

Interesting - almost smashing reality against cant

Dave

Spiros Zafiris
Senior Member

since 2002-10-20

Posts 982
Canada

3 posted 2004-03-21 05:30 AM

..Sunshine../\..:

.."while the love of apple persists.."

..indeed..much enjoyed--a circle poem,
more importantly....i often stand next to the frig, facing the east, and make circles
with my arms--forever certain it helps me,
immensely..thanks..

../\..Spiros
---------------finally back on internet----

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

4 posted 2004-03-21 06:50 AM

Karilea I don't know where you come up with all of these wonderful ideas but you're real good at it my dear lady friend.....

I just love this part..." When sun and moon arise
Eclipsing falsities "

Aw yes I love the positive.

Regards

Eric

Ain't doin nothin at all
Just answerin the call
Kinda driftin away from it all~~~~~

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2004-03-21 12:22 PM

YES!! Another keeper for my library!
Oooh the layers to this..love it!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding wound
...or a smiling mouth.

~ Kahlil Gibran

EternitysHorizon
Member

since 2002-05-03

Posts 145
Twilight's Orchestra

6 posted 2004-03-21 10:33 PM

Ringing Roundabout
Your Words
Circling to Sphere
GrazeInBrushUnfelt
Just to taste
Power of thy INspirational moment

Hat off
and deep bow
for a TRULY Remarkable piece

How'd the air breathe during this???????
Rare and sweet my guess

"High on the Mountain, where the Sun stil Shines, and the water runs a little lazy."

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