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PazSqual
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0 posted 2004-03-21 05:25 PM



To Whom it May Concern

Don't worry 'bout me
My heart has grown accustomed
To being alone


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DavePage
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1 posted 2004-03-21 05:46 PM


My life is mine alone
My soul is mine alone

My thoughts should ensure

You dont wait

For an early morning call

Dave

Martie
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2 posted 2004-03-21 05:47 PM


emotive writing, but maybe not sad...alone is not necessarily lonely.  
ThisDiamond
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3 posted 2004-03-21 06:07 PM


Interesting...

A succinct statement...
Love the brevity...must state for the record...
Not buyin it.

Thank you for the read.

TD

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4 posted 2004-03-21 06:18 PM


PazSqual~

I am apparently tardy in welcoming you to Passions In Poetry~
WELCOME

The completeness in this tiny piece is a pleasure to read~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

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5 posted 2004-03-21 07:09 PM


I hear ya! Mine too!
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
6 posted 2004-03-21 07:27 PM


Very well done and welcome to Passions!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding wound
...or a smiling mouth.

         ~  Kahlil Gibran

Bonnie j
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7 posted 2004-03-21 08:10 PM


You are not alone when you stop by these pages of blue. Someone is always here to reach out and touch your heart and send you a smile.
Love Bon-Bon

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8 posted 2004-03-21 10:14 PM


enjoyed

and i say Welcome to you as well!

jwesley
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9 posted 2004-03-21 10:17 PM


Understand...

jwesley

BluesSerenade
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10 posted 2004-03-21 10:23 PM


The clincher is,  that all too often,  
to whom it may concern, doesn't!

Welcome to Passions PazSqual~

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