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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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just another lonely woman just another lonely night just another thing to say just another hold me tight don't see pity in white walls clean so clean "you just moved in?" Tell her that you meant it thus-- the way the shadows stood so tall as if they were still pumped with pride a purity that cannot lie he smiled nodding as he dimmed silences of colors shout smiling at the pain of it... "We do the best we can," he said. "Sometimes it's just not good enough." Then he locked the door again. Then he brought me home... |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I enjoyed this read my friend. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..serenity blaze../\..much enjoyed.. ../\..Spiros --------------calm---- |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you do have a way of touching  |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Intersting I read it several times and I starting thinking about white walls and using lights and film to transform them into a vision of life Dave |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Under bluest light whiting shows the truest write... ~*~ I'd ask you to quit being so inspirational but it looks good on you...  |
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Blush Member
since 2002-08-31
Posts 56Ky |
Nicely done hun I enjoyed this read I just posted a new one also Hoping you do come see me Hugs Susan~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity, THe white walls contained the rainbow. He just didn't see it.  |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
"We do the best we can," he said. "Sometimes it's just not good enough." my ohhhhh my girl |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Dang!!! hugs, Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Yer so darn good! Love ya lady~ Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
serenity Touched to tears from this.  |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Karen?... What Martie said... Love you, lady... "When the power of love overcomes the love |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
may i bow? you nailed this......  |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
You're so darn Gorgeous, humph! rem what I told you? don't wait too long M  Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
this needs...a bump |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Serenity~ You tell it so good, with so much style and no frills. To me, that's the best part!!! |
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