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Melodious_silence
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0 posted 2004-03-20 09:21 PM



Odin's find
Sings to my heart
Through temptest season's way
To the generation.

Over the wind hope
There is a rainy day
And beneath the loam
Daughter of Mundilferi shines high.

Wolf of the sail
Curl your fingers
Around the shiny life muscle
And through my tassle

So far away
The wind blows again
To another
So gone and far away

Land of the tongue
Cries out to you
The heartless bitter
Cries out to you

Anger swells beneath the mountain

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aujussy wolf
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1 posted 2004-03-20 09:25 PM


strong write melodious one
i know the story of odin
rune master

Melodious_silence
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2 posted 2004-03-20 10:21 PM


Nice!  That's really good.  Most of my poems lately have come from Norse Kennings, I'm just playing around with it.  It was introduced to me by my Dad, if anyone as i'm sure everyone knows Ravenwolfvoyager.  I"m very proud of you daddy.  Love yah!
ThisDiamond
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3 posted 2004-03-20 10:28 PM


Especially love your last line...
A ribbon round the prize.

Wonderful write.
TD

iliana
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4 posted 2004-03-20 10:50 PM


Melodious --- very musically sounding and I really enjoyed the read.  You have you Dad's talent (say hi for me).  .......jo
Melodious_silence
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5 posted 2004-03-20 11:24 PM


Can do, jo, assuming I ever see him! ^_~  Thanks for the compliment too by the way!
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