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Odin's find
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Melodious_silence Junior Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 37 |
Odin's find Sings to my heart Through temptest season's way To the generation. Over the wind hope There is a rainy day And beneath the loam Daughter of Mundilferi shines high. Wolf of the sail Curl your fingers Around the shiny life muscle And through my tassle So far away The wind blows again To another So gone and far away Land of the tongue Cries out to you The heartless bitter Cries out to you Anger swells beneath the mountain |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
strong write melodious one i know the story of odin rune master |
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Melodious_silence Junior Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 37 |
Nice! That's really good. Most of my poems lately have come from Norse Kennings, I'm just playing around with it. It was introduced to me by my Dad, if anyone as i'm sure everyone knows Ravenwolfvoyager. I"m very proud of you daddy. Love yah! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Especially love your last line... A ribbon round the prize. Wonderful write. TD |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Melodious --- very musically sounding and I really enjoyed the read. You have you Dad's talent (say hi for me). .......jo |
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Melodious_silence Junior Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 37 |
Can do, jo, assuming I ever see him! ^_~ Thanks for the compliment too by the way! |
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