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Open Poetry #31

Ascending the Light...

Ku'uipo
Junior Member

since 2003-09-25

Posts 42

0 posted 2004-03-20 07:44 AM

Light flickers strangely soft
Illumination lost in violet eyes
Nimble fluxes sweetly speak
Transluscent glow a story lies

Wistful warmth I yearn to touch
Exposing extrinsic inherent ways
Forbidden felicity churns beneath
Unleashing illusion, illicit gaze

Bring forth the inquisitive
And incarcerate the glare
Infiltrate and ascend the fiery lair

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2004-03-20 09:41 AM

Light flickers strangely soft
Illumination lost in violet eyes

Beautiful vision!
Love, Margherita

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

2 posted 2004-03-20 11:03 AM

Nice imagery! You have an extensive vocabulary and you are very eloquent (you've got me beat by a long shot). Excellent work!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2004-03-20 02:37 PM

beautifully done!

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

4 posted 2004-03-20 04:50 PM

Excellent - quality

Dave

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

5 posted 2004-03-21 11:59 AM

"Bring forth the inquisitive
And incarcerate the glare
Infiltrate and ascend the fiery lair"

A reminder to meld curiosity and courage in the plunge and transcendence of all that burns.

Enjoyed,
TD

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