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poems about grieving |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought 
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I cry myself a love song ‘Cause it’s prettier than death. It’s just more beautiful, And I need beauty, now. Yesterday you told me You’d be dying anyway I wish it was okay, But what are wishes, really... I read poems about grieving. They don’t help, though... And I’ll miss you When you’re gone. He was a man of sorrows ...I am a girl of tears. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
GG -- this really grabbed me. I always enjoy reading you (I'm way behind with my reading -- you've probably noticed, but am going to try to catch up a little here and there).  ........jo |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
jo, thank you  I always love reading you and hearing from you, too. This is the first thing I've written for quite awhile, and I'm weeks behind with reading. Life just always seems to have a way to overwhelm us... doesn't it? take care!Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sometimes you hit the place where nothing helps...just gotta get through it with what you have...and you will  |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
just hope in time when words cant soothe |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
GG Economical to say the least, enjoyed. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Nothing helps in that case and that message is put across very well in this piece. Eric |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
I cry myself a love song ‘Cause it’s prettier than death. It’s just more beautiful, And I need beauty, now. I understand. Sometimes I plant evergreen seedlings when I get to this. It's great later to see how they've grown despite...The stores will overwhelm us with hyacinths and daffodils soon. I buy them, let them wilt and plant the bulbs soon afterward. And i hit the piano keys in the darkness and let whatever will come out, come out. Take care. I'm glad to see you writing. I'm debating whether or not to continue writing at this time, but if I do, be assured I will read your thoughts and think of you. If not, know that you have made an impression upon me. Sadie |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Dix, yeah, I just hate that getting through it means it'll happen. Ugh, I hate people I love dying =-/ Well thanks for your reply, love ya... Inked, I wish time would soothe, but it has a way of reminding us.. over and over again. Thank you, for replying Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Sey, death generally is... Thanks for your reply, glad you enjoyed. ethome, glad I got that message across, thats what I wanted to say. Thank you for replying Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Sadie, those sound like good ideas. I'm sixteen, so I imagine I'd have many years to watch the trees grow. I do the same thing with the piano, I'm here alone so there's no one else who has to hear the noise. Mostly, though, I just cry... yeah, I cry alot. I hope that you do continute writing and posting... I've not been on hardly at all lately, just life in the way, but when I am I love reading you. If not, then know the same thing, you've made an impression on me. But I truly do hope you continue writing... you have alot to share. Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows ...I am a girl of tears. |
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