Open Poetry #31 |
Shadow, Glance |
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Shadow, Glance Prognosticators of events Likened to tea leaves and gypsy tents Promised me so full a day, Of spring Of warm and sunny skies. I ventured out Into this gray, Seeking sun of other days, But nowhere was I to see My shadow duly attached to me. Moderate mild is all we feel A mist in silent cloud appeal, A spark of sun ‘Tis all I want, That, and shadow’s playful tease and taunt. Somewhere far my shadow has gone, I beg it come, it stays too long! Perhaps it’s on a bluebird’s wing In search of sound, To find sweet spring. In dark of moonless night, I’ll dream Of sun-kissed tomorrows come full stream, That shadow will chance to peek a glance, And favor me with but one dance, In this, I pray, sun seeks the sky… Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? Keeping in mind, I must stand close... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I believe that you are the sun Lady! adorable poetic verse |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"In dark of moonless night, I’ll dream Of sun-kissed tomorrows come full stream, That shadow will chance to peek a glance, And favor me with but one dance, In this, I pray, sun seeks the sky…" It's coming Karilea...tomorrow it's SPRING!! Love this...and also love the addition to your sig line. ~Big smiles & Hugs, Nancy/hip-sis. Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Ah, to read a Sunshine poem. 'tis a joy! |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Tomorrow is a new day As it blazes with sleet, sun, snow, wind, rain It remains a new day Some may just be satisfied with the view and life Dave |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
What could spring say, when posed such delighted requests? Smiling at you. TD |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
desperately seeking spring can she hear us? |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..Sunshine../\..much enjoyed reading this poem..forever your rare sensitivity is a treat.. ../\..Spiros -------------calm------- |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
we cant have shadows without the sun now can we? lovely write of rhymes poetess Sun...a treat to read aloud. Home is a feeling I buried in you ... |
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