»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #31
»
Excuse me, May I borrow me back? (I'm rummaging....)
| Open Poetry #31 |
|
Excuse me, May I borrow me back? (I'm rummaging....) |
|
|
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
|
Excuse me, May I borrow me back? I think it is time to borrow myself back from a place I didn't go with a resolve I lacked and now is the time to get myself into place while I stretch out to beat my own race… may I borrow me back? for a little while? I need to see again if that is indeed my smile, if that is my hair that I cut myself and I need to borrow my perfume there from off my shelf… it's time for me now to face an enterprise and if it could be the starship it would not disguise a bit of queer sensation that's been given to rise ever since I found this black hole that's been a huge surprise… I reckon it's that "crisis" that faces everyone the time to decide for good or bad if we're having any fun a year ago I thought quite keen a warp that I was in and relegated just myself to burrow deep in den and keep myself from thinkin' but you've been there… tinkerin'… and now my mind is brewing to percolate it does and just because there are elephants in the room doesn't mean it was time for me to stop thinking or time for me to quit so my mind will continue this racing life's quest even though I sit. So I'm going to borrow me again from the me that was and I'm not going to forget to stop and give me pause… nor will I ever stop from the moments of remember just because with life again I'm going to become a full fledged member…. so there I shall see you long on down the road and I will hear again that aged old rooster in this life give a good crow… for there are many stories still left here in me and I think I've just about begun to climb up the family tree… and whether silly, or sincere the message you will read shall be here… as will the deed… whether winsome or sparkling treasured or withered… know that if you hear it from me most likely all sources of claim will be dithered…. ~*~ From the Archives...2000 |
||
| © Copyright 2004 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Wow, I really liked this...  |
||
|
Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent Karilea...It's great to see the writers here dusting some older ones off and posting them...they are treasures!! Both the poets and the poems! Hugs YOU! Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
||
|
passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a feel-good write I've always had the notion that sometimes you have to kidnap yourself...lol |
||
|
DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Superb if I can still remember how to it. Yes dave |
||
vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked this |
||
|
Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Excellent-and different. I'm glad you brought it back so I could see. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
||
|
Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Sunshine, I do believe that we are on the same wavelength right now. The title sounds like something I would have chosen. Just got to find me in the attic somewhere before i can borrow me back! Thanks for posting this. I enjoyed, as usual. You are so talented. Sadie |
||
|
iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Karilea, I'm rummaging, too, so I really get this one! I enjoyed it very much!  .......jo |
||
|
Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
this is just great...glad you brouhgt it back - I wasn't rummaging here when it was last posted...Paul |
||
suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
ever since I found this black hole that's been a huge surprise… Have you been peeking in my mind? *S* I knew it had wandered off somewhere! LOL Excellent write, my friend... |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
