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catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2004-03-19 12:23 PM



Your voice in mine
a moment in time
mars and venus collide
tis always sublime

© Copyright 2004 Sandra - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2004-03-19 12:27 PM


Hi Sandra...so good to read you again!
This is lovely....
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding wound
...or a smiling mouth.

         ~  Kahlil Gibran

passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2004-03-19 01:08 PM


neat write...cherish those brief moments
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
3 posted 2004-03-19 01:45 PM


catalinamoon,
Sounds good to me. Enjoyed

DavePage
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4 posted 2004-03-19 04:23 PM


As one we seem

In love

Extreme

Vibrations

Echoing

Dave

vandana
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5 posted 2004-03-19 04:31 PM


nice
Margherita
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Eternity
6 posted 2004-03-20 10:16 AM


Very beautiful!

Love, Margherita

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Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving
7 posted 2004-03-21 12:52 PM


enjoyed
jwesley
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8 posted 2004-03-21 01:30 AM


very cool, my friend!

jwesley

Blush
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9 posted 2004-03-21 11:41 PM


Very nicely done
I posted one early today too do come see me
Blessings
Susan~

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10 posted 2004-03-22 11:04 AM


Hey lady, so good to see you here and read your words again.  Please come visit more often, you are so missed!  HUGS
Mistletoe Angel
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11 posted 2004-03-24 06:18 PM




(big angel hugs) Awwwwwwwww, this is sooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, I'm so happy to read your wonderful poetry again, yay! (does happy dance) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

Dark Angel
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12 posted 2004-03-24 07:39 PM


This is lovely CatalinaMoon...Nice to see you here again.

Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder.
(by Virginia Woolf)

iliana
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13 posted 2004-04-09 09:44 PM


Sandra, I liked this so much!   jo
Penomous Verson
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14 posted 2004-04-09 09:46 PM


i read it twice..

well said

love & respect
PenVerse

ctowen
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15 posted 2004-04-09 10:22 PM


Some moments are just a drag ....

      ... But, I hear you!  

                            Nice to read you, ALWAYS!

jwesley
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16 posted 2004-04-09 10:35 PM


ahh...loved this did I!

jwesley

vandana
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17 posted 2004-04-11 08:24 PM


enjoyed
inkedgoddess
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18 posted 2004-04-11 09:44 PM


yes sublime is the perfect word isnt it?
Juju
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In your dreams
19 posted 2004-04-11 09:54 PM


Sandra I liked this one alot.Short and Simple.

Juju

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