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The Scent of Lilac
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The Scent of Lilac |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
The Scent of Lilac Under a dark moonless sky seemingly going on forever speckled with radiant stars we lay among the flowers watching as a single comet lit up the sky just for us. After pulling you closer I caught a scent of lilac floating soft on the wind reminding me of an age long past a time of southern belles. As we cuddled and kissed emotions and desires whirled and twirled in our very being. Taking us to the edge of a place only lovers go. alan aka Icyheart 03/14/04 |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Under a dark moonless sky seemingly going on forever speckled with radiant stars we lay among the flowers watching as a single comet lit up the sky just for us. ============================= the imagery in this is poetically lovely, well done poet sir...nice to see you posting again. Home is a feeling I buried in you ... |
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WildPoet Member
since 2003-11-10
Posts 205California |
Hey, this is great imagery. Good job! WildPoet  |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
...this is dreamy and loving, and certainly not "icyheart-ish"! ~K~ |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
caught myself inhaling deeply... with eyes closed ....lost in the images thank you for that!! snow "yet each man kills the thing he loves |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a pretty piece |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Alan...so good to read you here. Very much enjoyed this piece! Hugs~ Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You captured a beautiful scent! Love, Margherita  |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I thought I recognized your touch...beautifully written |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oh, I can't wait for my lilac bushes to blossom!! Very nice Alan. hugs, Chris |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
i too smell the lilacs enjoyed  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"aka IcyHeart" ??? My goodness, I don't think so! This poem had to have been written by someone with a very WarmHeart!  Thanks, I needed that!   EA |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Lovely imagery! |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
*sigh* sweetness |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sounds like a wonderful place to be. Great imagery. Sandra |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
oh yummy I can absolutely smell them with the prose your words speak...thank you |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
I would like to thank everyone for your time and your comments. I was coming just to read some more and got my mind blown. I never dreamed this was still getting replies. Thank you again. alan |
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