Open Poetry #31 |
Spring Prayer |
inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
Deliver them carefully heads crowning thru the brown veil of earth there is no need for haste breathe the light as you bear down on your own time snow still sits on the branches while you wait for clearance the late march frost melts into a tonic of hope and a warning of premature birth save a place for them and bring them safely to the season with the blessings of those that paved the way for them [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (03-20-2004 08:08 AM).] |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
You are blessed with a good writing ability. Enjoyed this one! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Amen. Poor little buds...peeking out and getting snow in their eyes. I pray too that they will be fine. Enjoyed. Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Deliver them carefully to planets heads crowning thru the brown veil of earth tendered with the neligence that allows growth there is no need for haste breathe the light as you bear down on your own time rocking your beat sweetest snow still sits on the branches while you wait for clearance of runways while the late march frost melts into a tonic of hope and a warning of premature birth from those happier summer moments save a place for them and bring them safely to the season with the blessings of those that paved the way for them Love your word Ink - more than I probably should Davey |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Michele..as delicate as the tiny buds pushing forth. Very much enjoyed this write. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thanks kids thanks dave, glad to inspire |
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*Belabebeautiful*
since 2003-01-03
Posts 696washington, USA |
A truly beautiful write... ~Live and Laugh~ Because of you I laugh a little harder, smile a little more, and cry a little less |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
"save a place for them and bring them safely to the season with the blessings of those that paved the way for them" ...just lovely... ~K~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome! |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
Very nice Mish |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Amen |
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