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Separation Anxiety
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Separation Anxiety |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Separation Anxiety Feelings fade when time is out of place and touch has become a hollow verse. When eyes hide behind, their squint a distance look, as the dark circles under join the sanctuary of those sleepless nights. I look for it, though a needle in a haystack, or a meeting of the minds, a place to belong, to feel wanted, not just a charm to dangle on a link. I don't search, for I have found the second path, though undisciplined, with muted colors leading me on, enough reality to kiss my thoughts, but needlessly unlabeled. I feel this in my heart, sometimes swallowing my pride, as I watch the flames rise and the warmth flow... on this, the other side. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Always two sides, huh M? Excellent write. TD |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Enjoyed.  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
there is a time for everything  |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
great poem here - so well done - Paul |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Awesome writing of true feelings as usual Maureen. hugs, Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
M -- W O W ! ! ! Totally awesome poem!  .......jo"I don't search, for I have found the second path, though undisciplined, with muted colors leading me on, enough reality to kiss my thoughts, but needlessly unlabeled." I identify with this verse. |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
you know mmoonchild, muted is a nice shade sometimes...never loud, never washed out...but subtle..classy...and youve always been a classy lady even through all the sadness you wear you words well |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Your inner feelings are displayed perfectly M....we see your mind....without pretence.... Thank you... Goldenrose. ''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity'' |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Yes I really liked this - soft, muted, undersung, meaningfull, quite potent. Lovely Dave All I wanted was some joy Not attached to the wrist Like some old jangling toy |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Loved every word of this, and your title too. Nicely said and done Maur~ |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
"I look for it, though a needle in a haystack, or a meeting of the minds, a place to belong, to feel wanted, not just a charm to dangle on a link." I especially enjoyed this verse because I can personally relate to it. Enjoyed! "You sleep in the night yet the night and the silent water still so dark." |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Oh, Maureen ... I'm glad I'm on this side reading your work Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I don't search, for I have found the second path, though undisciplined, with muted colors leading me on, enough reality to kiss my thoughts, but needlessly unlabeled. I feel this in my heart, sometimes swallowing my pride, as I watch the flames rise and the warmth flow... on this, the other side. =========================== and then you turn it into lovely poetry... and this is....indeed. Home is a feeling I buried in you ... |
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