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catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2004-03-12 10:21 AM

To love forever-simple words
spoken in time that used to be
true love will last through all of time
on this belief we both agreed.

But as time twists through many years
forever is a fluent thought
the heart will change without free will
from what was all to what is not.

We never did intend to say
forever truly came today.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2004-03-12 10:52 AM

indeed

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2004-03-12 11:10 AM

Exactly Sandra!
So good to read you here!!
Big hugs and welcome home!
~Smiles, Nancy~

Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding wound
...or a smiling mouth.

~ Kahlil Gibran

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

3 posted 2004-03-12 11:46 AM

Excellent.

PKreturns
Member

since 2003-07-21

Posts 362
New Orleans, LA

4 posted 2004-03-12 12:48 PM

Wow. Liked the ending.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

5 posted 2004-03-12 12:56 PM

Ooooh, there you are sweet poetess.
So good to read your words again. Lovely.
hugs, Chris

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

6 posted 2004-03-13 01:58 AM

Oh yes, my lil sis, you did say it perfectly! Sometimes forever is only a day, I agree, and then we are left wondering if there will be more....excellent writing from the pen of my favorite poetess...~S~

Music washes away from the soul the dust of everyday life

Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

7 posted 2004-03-13 05:05 AM

Well written..i enjoyed..

Thank you...
Goldenrose.

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2004-03-13 06:46 PM

I always wonder if we are capable of forever...James

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

9 posted 2004-03-13 08:44 PM

perfectly stated, really enjoyed this

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

10 posted 2004-03-14 12:15 PM

Brilliant writing and thought provoking!

wordwizard
Member

since 2003-09-08

Posts 483
on the way to next world

11 posted 2004-03-14 01:11 AM

how appropriate a write it is when man still looks for the forever and a day..esp in romance!

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

12 posted 2004-03-15 12:02 PM

To share a laugh, a tear
   your smile, your fear

   an absence, a kiss
   fulfilling your wish

   to hold to heart
   never to part

   would forever be
   your love to me

               Your words still carry your hearts beat.

                              *S  xo

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

13 posted 2004-03-15 07:51 PM

Hello Sandra

Your words are always written with the utmost of elegance. It is so nice to see you here again and I hope all is well with you.

"We are all angels with only one wing
......we can fly only by embracing each other"

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

14 posted 2004-03-15 07:55 PM

liked it

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

15 posted 2004-03-15 08:16 PM

sometimes it is terrible being a romantic, Sandra...

hugs
M

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

16 posted 2004-03-17 10:35 PM

forever is a fluent thought
the heart will change without free will
from what was all to what is not.

A telling poem indeed!!
It's so good to read you Sandra~

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

17 posted 2004-03-18 12:33 PM

Very beautifully written and so true. Forever is a relative concept, but its beauty lies in the moment.
Love, Margherita

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

18 posted 2004-03-18 01:03 PM

*sigh* that word will outlast many romances
good to read you again, lady

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

19 posted 2004-03-18 04:06 PM

Enjoyed the write Sandra, nice to read you again...

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

20 posted 2004-03-18 04:41 PM

It seems my favorite nurse has written a wonderfully fantastic piece.

I love it!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Goodknight
Member Elite

since 2002-06-15

Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

21 posted 2004-03-19 11:14 AM

deeply sensitive poetry here - touches many at the heart of them - well done - Paul

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