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DavePage
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0 posted 2004-03-16 02:32 PM


Life can seem a depressing time
The rain is in
Life now moves to the relationships you couldn’t handle in the summer
How do you handle them in the winter

Some times you choose to get together
But only after a long period of trying to live together
Now life forces us all to have to live with someone of something
It might be loneliness or a ring

In the quick break from the summer
It is easy to run
From those who bloom in the summer
We have those winter plants
Who don’t move much
But lay down those deep roots
When the winter calls

Who would choose
Those who can charm you through the summer
Or those who can get you through the winter


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Cpat Hair
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1 posted 2004-03-16 02:36 PM


Dave,
we ask members to limit themselves to three posts a day and encourage all to read and reply to ther people's works. This technically is the fourth post as I count them for you today and while I'll not pull or move it because it is over the limit or suggested limit, I'll ask you to remember to read and comment as well..


DavePage
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2 posted 2004-03-16 02:59 PM


I do and read comment.

Most the poems I am looking at are grey'd out on my screen because I have read and commented.

By the time I have finished I will have read 10 to 15 poems on this session and commented on them and possibly I will read another 10 poems in 3 or 4 hours.

Dave


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3 posted 2004-03-16 03:28 PM


cool!


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