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PKreturns Member
since 2003-07-21
Posts 362New Orleans, LA |
So this is how it feels in the end Numb and aware at the same time Lost a lover and worse, a friend Faded from the photographs in my mind It’s the ambivalence that haunts me most How I’ve become my own transparent ghost Never thought I would live to see this day Used to spend hours writing of such a thing While letting the words have all the play Now the absence of feeling is the thing that stings We both realize we’ve reached that point unintended As we acknowledge now what has just ended |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Numb and aware at the same time... The inner sea is fed with the tears of the journey. Hang in there. TD |
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PassionatelyRomantic Member
since 2004-01-24
Posts 190 |
much enjoyed this one great write! |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Always used to feel that life goes upwards or downwards and there is a finite point when it does this. Dave |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
I can relate to this one.... I guess hindsight IS 20/20 after all. Lovely write! |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Ouch! Love can sting!  |
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