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Two Days
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Two Days |
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Abe Senior Member
since 2003-05-28
Posts 694Looks like Vero Beach, FL until the end! 
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TWO DAYS The day is short and long Just like, the one before. It's either right or wrong I don't know which, for sure. There's pages I have written And some, that I have not. There's some pages I have written That, I have no longer, got. The day is short and long Just like, the one before. It's either right or wrong I don't know which, for sure. Del "Abe" Jones |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Very nice... very good rhyme!  |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
this has a nice flow |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
A metric it reminded me of various things Dave |
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