Open Poetry #31 |
Of Specters |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Of Specters Specters show in forms of force That lifts you up in winds of toss And carry you to Isles of wiles Where styles and riles are whirly guiles They stir your senses to a boil Cook them on a spit of foil Render them to memory grease Less the wick to burn in peace They splutter like a popcorns bust Full of sound and full of lust Sanctioning a fantasy A little bit of lunacy They are the friction rubs of bind That lights a flame within your mind And turns a ghost to spirit host To bring the fear that chars the toast They lives within the echo swells They are the sounds of memory bells. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Oh yes...they really are the sounds of memory bells, Sy, and how well I understand the thoughts here! Always so good to read from your pen...~S~ Music washes away from the soul the dust of everyday life |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
"They lives within the echo swells They are the sounds of memory bells." That they are, Sy. Stirring write. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Your specters sound hungry this morning, Sy...let's feed them biscuits and sausage gravy - we'll dine on bagels and lox, and flummox them with poetry...what do you say? |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Morning Sy m'friend! Wonderful morning read as always... Much enjoyed. ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~ Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Hi Seymour. Two words for you this morning my friend. LOVE IT! Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
They splutter like a popcorns bust Full of sound and full of lust Sanctioning a fantasy A little bit of lunacy They are the friction rubs of bind That lights a flame within your mind And turns a ghost to spirit host To bring the fear that chars the toast ===================================== I knew from the title this was gonna be a cool one but those verses rock..you and Randy are in rare form Sy-babes. You pop the corn..I'll bring the butter. and of course..winkies for Randy. lol *ww* I am sure of my reasons, embracing the seasons, |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
hmmmm ... pure genius ....... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
They splutter like a popcorns bust Full of sound and full of lust Sanctioning a fantasy A little bit of lunacy Such a vivid fantasy YOU have. Beautiful write. Love, Margherita |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning hugs to my favourite sonneteer! ~ Begone specters! Get thee back to the "echo swells"!!! You're not going to foil and boil my friend! No sireebob! Dream sweet, Dear One! This "angel" is watching over you... EA |
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PassionatelyRomantic Member
since 2004-01-24
Posts 190 |
spectacular write! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunnyone Thank you so much for the read and coment. scorpio Thank you my friend. Sunshine, I say thank you sweet. Hugs Nancy, You are serving tea and sympathy? Hugs EvocativeVerse2 Love you for loving it. JM, Your up beat is a treat. WWRS aujussy wolf, You make me blush. LOL Margherita Thank you sweet. Earth Angel With you watching I will dare the demons. PassionatelyRomantic PassionatelyRomantic You have filled my head with helium. LOL |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Seymour, What a lovely poem. Sigh. Memeries of the past all ways come back to haunt us all. Some times the pain ........ hurts so much. lovely poem Juju |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Very good, Sy! As usual! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Juju Thank you for the lovely. Grover And thank you my friend. |
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