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PKreturns
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since 2003-07-21

Posts 362
New Orleans, LA

0 posted 2004-03-16 08:43 AM

Write me a poem
Make it speak just for me
Sprinkle hidden messages
That only I can see

Tell me the truth
Of how you feel when I’m near
Written whispered words of desire
For only me to hear

Send it quick now
So that it reaches in time
This one who needs those words
Like oxygen from your mind

Without a poem from you,
Life has no height nor breadth
With no words from your thought,
I die my thousandth death

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2004-03-16 08:55 AM

What a challenge.
I shall see what I can do...soon!

muted

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since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

2 posted 2004-03-16 09:10 AM

oh, i wish someone would do that for me too!

such sweet fun

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2004-03-16 09:26 AM

PKreturns
Enjoyed the read.

Bonnie j
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since 2003-06-27

Posts 1588
Ohio

4 posted 2004-03-16 10:28 AM

Oh what excitement to have someone send words across the miles just for your eyes to see. Words just for you to understand.
Caressing your eyes with a feathered pen.
A joke between two that no one else understands.Gee....That sounds lovely.
Love Bon-Bon

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

5 posted 2004-03-16 11:57 AM

Grin

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

6 posted 2004-03-16 12:46 PM

Wonderfully penned request, powerfully stated.

would that should be
the one from whom you seek
I could not place it here
for others sure would hear

but knowing I am not
then this is quite the spot
to lay my ideated thoughts
by all your words have brought

hehe

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

7 posted 2004-03-16 01:05 PM

can't top that one VAS

I cry
in silent
*sigh*
for this
to reach thine eye
in yonder sky.

PKreturns
Member

since 2003-07-21

Posts 362
New Orleans, LA

8 posted 2004-03-16 01:06 PM

Thank you all for the great replies, especially VAS. You leave me scratching my head though.

PassionatelyRomantic
Member

since 2004-01-24

Posts 190

9 posted 2004-03-16 01:52 PM

great write how true!

Juju
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since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

10 posted 2004-03-16 05:00 PM

(jrueling) I had a special guy who once wrote songs and poes about me....(Blushes)hehehe it was nice................ Really nice. hehehehehiheh
auh
good old memories.
Juju

Grover
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since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

11 posted 2004-03-16 05:04 PM

Very good writing here!

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

12 posted 2004-03-16 05:09 PM

I love this!
It would be so nice to have someone write poems especially for another's eyes only.

Hugs~

Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding wound
...or a smiling mouth.

~ Kahlil Gibran

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

13 posted 2004-03-16 05:30 PM

enjoyed

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