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The Shining Feeling
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The Shining Feeling |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada 
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It's that time of year again and the inspiration comes in waves... The Shining Feeling From where I stand I see the thaw and on the frozen floor the sun upon the glowing crust is glistening bright and pure. Upon the rolling marbled hills the glossy snowdrifts ride. There is no place nor earthly thrill like springtime greenwood life. A musty scent is on the air, I lift my head and breathe. Out of the sky I seem to hear a calling on the breeze. The sound of God and life and wild, the sound of earth that grows, out of the wind that whispers by the sound of trees that moan. I know just why it is I care, I bend my head and pray. I cannot lock them in my heart these tear drops on my face. © Eric True Ain't doin nothin at all |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I can't lock away and hide the smell of musk is on me now-- guilty oils luxurious and fingerprints of dance step how-- "here" you take a thumb and dare wipe the sweat and strand of hair from my face luxurious-- laughing I don't have a care curtsey cottons dressing down swooping braving cups abreast-- as I gaze at you from brow and my fiddle braves the rest... just a little, doesy-doe. just the strong arm of your bow there beneath my chin on strings arching me to play pretend Bend me back to womanhood make my fists find hips defy as the sweat drips down my chest and drizzles secrets inner thigh... teaching you the steps, m'lord. teaching me to blush again.  missed you eric. =============== and hope you don't mind? smile. I wanted to write one I was sure you understood!  Missed you much.  (and I apologize, too, should I delete? I got a bit carried away with your moment of inspire...) |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
enjoyed this  and also enjoyed the reply you got from it! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thanks Celeste for the neat reply and for missing me.....Good to read your words. Eric |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Eric~ lovely indeed.... ~~**~~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank you muted I appreciate the read and the response. I also enjoyed the reply I received. |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
A sense of being there, seeing, smelling the air Excellent Dave |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
well done poetry here - enjoyed feeling the emotion you painted - Paul |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
The sound of God and life and wild, the sound of earth that grows, out of the wind that whispers by the sound of trees that moan. This is just beautiful and going directly into my library! hugs, Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Eric I enjoyed this...it felt like dancing...enjoyed Karen's poetic reply, also. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank you Lauren I appreciate the kind words. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Dave Thank you very much for being there and seeing smelling etc....I appreciate the read and response. Paul I appreciate your kind words and I thank you so much for the visit. Eric Ain't doin nothin at all |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
inspiration indeed! enjoyed this! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Vandana Thanks for the visit. Chris Thank you for liking that verse it's my favorite in the whole piece. I appreciate your kind words... Eric |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Nightshade, Martie and Passing I thank you so much for the kind words and the positive input.....Love ya! Eric Ain't doin nothin at all |
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