Open Poetry #31 |
aftermath |
jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
after a great deal of erosion and an ensuing earthquake of massive proportion our toes edge the overhang separately situated, we witness the remaining ground steadily crumble out from under, but the space between seems unbreachable looking down is to give in and leap so I must look up and trust You Lord to be my next step, to be the ground between |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Well sweetie...after math I took algebra..it wasn't a pretty site either...then I wanted to intercourse, (or is that enter chorus?)....either way, I know I screwed up cause while I was singing Stout hearted men in chorus, my friends were all out getting laid and laughing at me?....I just can't win...yanno?...all kidding aside.,,Let's meet up this weekend ya wanna?..I'll "sing" for ya?...You're becoming a hell of a poet young lady......take care sweetie...you're much stronger than ya think.. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
when the ground shakes too hard, its comforting to find blue sky to hang onto a good heart write, jellybeans |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Very good write... put your trust in the Lord and He will direct your path. Well-written, enjoyed much! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent write jellybeans. You hang in there. Hugs~ Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I wish I had your faith JB |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
you amaze me with your courage and faith |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
"Remarkable" becomes you... it is the strength that you have in an unshakable faith that is going to get you through... everything. |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
thank you all so much, I guess I see my faith differently than you, when faith is all you have its not hard to hang on with all you got....*smile* thank you again |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
jellybeans - tommorrow will always bring a change for the better... BC |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Fly like a star wars destroyer Tractor beam active Jedi queued up Very special words for something that has a yawning cavern Dave |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This additional pain happens all too often... the ones who should be hurting together instead start tearing apart... Beautiful work, my friend... stay strong... and faith isn't all you have... you have me. *S* |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
thank you all, and lady, thank you for your love...don't think I would be here without it *smile* |
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