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DavePage
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since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

0 posted 2004-03-15 09:08 AM

Hair splayed across the pillow
Most in my mouth
Bus rumbling by
Noise of the morning
Dont want to wake you
Dont want to leave
Know
It's time to go

That look in your eyes
A kind of crimson mess
Swirling the world
Beneath your feet
To match your dress
To avoid defeat
To force retreat

Catching the world
Matching your hair
Spinning summer all you dared
For loving deep in your embrace
Of sky and eternity’s great race
To tomorrow’s immaturity
And grace

Snow

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since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

1 posted 2004-03-15 03:11 PM

i feeeeeeeeel so much from this read!!

warmth and comfort
love and passion
sadness and ache
and... a sense of longing for

what ? i'm not sure. because i get a few mixed messages from it. damn i love when poetry can do that to me.

excellent, imho!

snow

"yet each man kills the thing he loves
by each let this be heard,
some do it with a bitter look,
some with a flattering word"
oscar wilde

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2004-03-15 03:40 PM

I think at times we all can relate to this
it's life...sometimes nice, sometimes not so nice...sometimes yearning...and yet...they say in this world there is one special soul mate for every person...well sir, if that's a fantasy, I'm holdin on for dear life and I'll live in Disney Land forever. (smiles)

Outstanding write David....very much enjoyed.

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2004-03-15 03:55 PM

sometimes that mouthful of hair tastes good
and sometimes, not

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

4 posted 2004-03-15 03:59 PM

Is this a special lady? I've seen these lines in one of your other posts:

"That look in your eyes
A kind of crimson mess"

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2004-03-15 04:19 PM

WOW!! I love this!
Excellent write Dave...
and it's so good to 'see' you!
Hugs~

Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding wound
...or a smiling mouth.

~ Kahlil Gibran

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

6 posted 2004-03-15 04:21 PM

Summer Morns are the same lady

I wrote the initial when we lived in Chelsea in London

The next was in Chelsea and then I wrote this last year I think

I published the three because I took central themes yet I had change or my other half had and maybe I romantised but other things of those years made me change the not original words because I did lose those and their dreams of sun and a party and dawn

Dave

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