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Goodknight
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0 posted 2004-03-14 08:05 PM


Must meaning only express in light
What about the dark of night
Can’t we find some part of us
Struggling within the dark and must
Don’t wonder if I’ve lost my mind
It is still there though I cannot find
Where life controls the ways of us
The ways we move and act and trust
Sometimes we think we must
Dust the cobwebs from our minds
But maybe those are connections
That make us who we are
And helps us to find meaning in our lives
So careful now we must be
To look in dark and dusty spaces
To dig inside so we might see
The stuff that makes us
You and me

© Copyright 2004 Paul Tofte - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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1 posted 2004-03-14 08:17 PM


Paul

This is so very true!  

Goodknight
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2 posted 2004-03-14 08:21 PM


thanks Martie - it sure seem to be true - appreciate you comments - Paul
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3 posted 2004-03-14 09:08 PM


Yes, you're so right Paul. And this is going into my library! hugs, Chris

   Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
                                          Hans Christian Anderson

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4 posted 2004-03-14 09:14 PM


How true Paul...dust my mind out while you're at it okay?
Hugs~

Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding wound
...or a smiling mouth.

         ~  Kahlil Gibran

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5 posted 2004-03-14 10:06 PM


ponderful write, Paul
guess I should put my duster away

iliana
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6 posted 2004-03-15 12:29 PM


Paul, another brilliant piece by you -- encore!
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